Monday, March 12, 2012
Can you please extract my criticism?
Some newer which is a fungus on the skin Tip: question : Can you please critique my extract Yet another excerpt from my novel, The Kite Ransom. I am 14 years old, a budding writing, and I welcome constructive critisim :) For 3 much more days of my existence drowned in, sitting, standing, pacing, attempting to pass the time. Defense against attacks Ralph, now the other at a distance ice, evil against the world. Ralph continues to be optimistic of us although I was on the cynique.La lives in
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